Only Earthquakes Were Enough
Ive been thereand I let myself miss so much.Never listening to the ripplesalways waiting to be crushedBelieving only earthquakes were enough.You kept runningwaiting to be swept awaynever digging below...
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*squirms that poem was so wonderful* I don't know anyone around here yet, but I've really enjoyed reading some of your poetry, and this one was very touching and so true. I really like the image of...
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Lovely poem Paul... I like how you used earthquakes as a metaphor for an impactive expression... Great job on this.
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When we must almost shake the groundTo illicit a response or twoWe start wondering is it worth it?Or should I draw the line with you?No soft whisper touches..no I must be toughWith some people it is...
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paul ... this is wonderfully written ... and beautifully expressed, as only you can ... a sense of regret in these words ... perhaps, for something you couldn't reach ... and I guess you're right -...
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This reminds me of a scene from the Film "Four Weddings and a Funeral"...where there is a discussion of whether love comes only when there are thunderbolts in the air...beautifully expressed...great...
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Loved the end line, it tied all together very well...great work...JessicaIt's not easy to hide, all this damage inside, and I'll carry it with me until I'm not alive...when you look at my face, does...
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